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Re: Song
Short, but when has size mattered ^.^ If this was one of your first songs, then i'd love to see them now, this is amazing =] This is one people ...
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Re: Silence Before the Storm
Again, this is really good =] I kinda ended up paying this, it's really good to put a tune with ^.^ This one isn't that repetive, you've evened out the ...
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Re: The Road to Home
This song has lots of emotion in, its great =] Like Dr Jamie. Bondage said, you could of took either added some extra verses or lengthened your original ones, because ...
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Re: Separated
wow =] You really used a lot of good imagary in there ^.^ The first verse is my faourite i think, and a catching opener. And also, it seems quite ...
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Re: From The Key Board To The Side Walk
Its not very long, but i was just playing chords on guitar and came up with it 'cos i was trying to write a new song for when me and ...
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Re: Don't Let Us Go
tres coolios =] never knew there was a lyric forum =P I shall be posting i love the way you got so much emotion into such a piece i can ...
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Re: Earth Abides
yeh, i drew it and made it up, its the old bridge in Ponty where i live. Its supposed to be some kind of neo apocolyptic future, where some kind ...
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Re: The Long Walk Home
It's only short, so i guess it's like a short story thing, not like a really detailed novel ^.^ I walked down the long road, dust kicked up under my ...
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Re: A girl named Revelation part 1
hehe, mine isnt going to be half as long as all the rest =] I didn't have the concentration span, and can barely pick up the screw ups in my ...
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Re: Happily Ever After
Thats freaky, its like Matrix stuff hehe. What human kind will end up being. The way you made the characters so different realy worked with the story, and what happened, ...
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Re: Mask
very good poem, but what's it based on? But i liked some of the ideas =]] Especially the glass mask one, how it can break easily, and doesnt work as ...
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Re: Addiction
Addiction of the Sweetest Kind I'm burning here, Fading away, Between your fingers, Your first today, Your lips touch me, And take me in, A part of me dies, I ...
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Re: What's This Feeling?
awwwww ^.^ Tis tres coote =] Kawaii! It sums up everything you feel, its really good =]] I love it, Eva XxXxX
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Re: What heart?
i Liked, the bit where you said She'd be another girl conquered reminded me of the New Found Glory, Kiss Me Video, where he makes a tally of the girls ...
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Re: Body heat 9a love poem)
This is actually really wierd, but in a good way =] It seemed like you were trying to go on the lnes of the narator going to sleep, but it ...
May 11, 2008
